Monday, November 07, 2005

Part Six

The girl held up a high-powered stun gun, while the two boys and the man held golf clubs menacingly. “Ok, just step away from that ‘golf ball,” the girl ordered. Rachel started to back away. As she did, she reached down to Smita’s pocket, and undid the catch. Smita burst from the pocket! Jumping, she first bit the Syndicate girl squarely on the wrist, and then, leaping to the ground, she shoved the golf ball holding the Eden Microchip into the hole. Below them, they heard the sound of the ten separate locks closing the transport chamber, each keeping the Eden Microchip safe. Safe, beyond the Syndicate’s reach.

“We might have lost the chip, we aren’t going to loose you!” snarled the Syndicate man in the red shirt. He and the girl, both holding stun guns, advanced toward Rachel and James. Suddenly, the sound of a helicopter battered the air. James and Rachel could see the fifteen members of the team from HQ dropping to the ground. Soon, they had formed a perimeter, and subdued the Syndicate agents. “Amazing work, you two,” Xavier exclaimed. “Enough excitement for your first assignment, Rachel?” he asked. “Almost,” she replied with a grin.

Now, two hours later, a special transport team from HQ was winging its over the Pacific, back to the secret Easter Island labs. There, under the watchful eyes of the stone moai and hundreds of HQ security members, the Eden Microchip would be safe. There it would remain, until its powerful information could be used only for good, for the whole of humankind.

--The End

8 Comments:

Blogger Anna said...

Yay! Thanks for the story Lou. :) What fun! :)

3:36 PM, November 07, 2005  
Blogger Zander said...

Thanks it was good!!!!

8:24 AM, November 08, 2005  
Blogger claire said...

Encore! Encore!
~Claire~

9:46 AM, November 08, 2005  
Blogger Islandlassie said...

Great story Louis! Thanks!
Love
Nora

10:29 AM, November 08, 2005  
Blogger Louiswoof said...

Thanks guys, it was fun! I got to read in class yesterday, which was good. I should write more. Ok, if I were to write a serial story on my blog, what should it be about? I could do Settler Dan, but it just isn't the same without the funny voices. :-)

3:41 PM, November 08, 2005  
Blogger Anna said...

Hey, I have an idea. What if we made a blog that all the sibs could post on and we did a round robin story. We could have the posts go in age order, or just as people felt inspired. OR we could go with the random photo/story theme and one person would post a photo and the next person would have to incorporate it into the ongoing story.... hee, hee, this could be fun. Whatcha guys think?
love,
a

11:01 PM, November 08, 2005  
Blogger claire said...

Hey that is a good idea Anna! I think that it would be fun!
~Claire~

12:02 PM, November 09, 2005  
Blogger Islandlassie said...

Sounds like fun! I'm all for it:)

~Nora

12:42 PM, November 09, 2005  

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